User:KylinZX/Ne Zha (2019 film)/Cm0030 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(KylinZX)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KylinZX/Ne_Zha_%282019_film%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ne Zha (2019 film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

-         Content is solid and provides lots of info

-         Clear and concise

-         Good intro sentence

-         Nay consider some rephrasing/proofreading, but content overall is good

Plot

-         Content is solid

-         May want to consider some trimming if possible, relatively dense

Background

-         Supporting details found here are helpful

-         May want to consider being less broad with statement on “modern parenting”

o  The practices of contemporary parenting are not necessarily universal, often subjective

o  Can specify which setting/context’s modern parenting this film’s dynamic is the epitome of

Themes

-         Assuming that future edits will add explicit explanations of what these stereotypes are, as well as how they are broken down (with examples from scenes)

Sources

-         May want to consider seeking out additional sources and ones from academic journals, publications, etc.

Overall

-         Content seems to be very neutral

-         Addition of images is helpful as well as visually appealing (in terms of images themselves and placement)

-         Content added to the articles provides further insight and more detail, is helpful, improves the article