User:KylinZX/Ne Zha (2019 film)/Kei Takahashi0512 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KylinZX/Ne Zha (2019 film)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KylinZX/Ne_Zha_%282019_film%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first paragraph of the draft explains the company that created the film and the format of the film. At the same time, it summarizes the origin of the character of the protagonist Nezha, and briefly explains the message and emotion that the film wants to convey to the audience.This draft is very clear about the production of the film and the introduction of the actors. They have a list of the actors, which is very convenient for readers to get to know the actors of the movie. They also wrote the film's theme soundtrack and ending song. They fully explained the background of the film production and the background of the story in the film. The description of the storyline of the movie is also very detailed, from the origin of Nezha's soul to the birth and growth of Nezha, which are very detailed, and the content is very interesting. They fully grasp the important plot of the story, which allows readers to understand the content of the story very clearly and not miss key information. With the growth and changes of Nezha and the advancement of the storyline, the audience can deeply appreciate the information and emotions that the film is trying to convey.