User:Kyrastewart/Nirjutiqavvik National Wildlife Area/Omwongg Peer Review

The lead section could be strengthened if all topics discussed in the article were included, not just geography.

The information about the Inuk people's land rights was interesting, but the paragraph could benefit from some simplification, especially when with the citing of the Articles, it makes it difficult to read.

For reading order, I suggest putting the paragraph about Inuit communities right after the paragraph about the Inuk land rights.

It seems like some citations are missing for some of the statistics listed:

- "contains more than 10% of the Canadian breeding population of thick billed murres and black legged kittiwakes"

-"About 385,000 seabirds’ nest on the steep coastal cliffs in Nirjutiqarvik. 11% of the Thick-Billed Murres and 16% of the Black-Legged Kittiwakes breeding populations in Canada occupy these nesting grounds."

The section on Inuit practices was well written and provided interesting info and a necessary perspective, but it does need citations.

The climate change section explains the aspects of warming well and they are supported by citations. If it's possible include events that happened in the specific region and the species affected, as the information already written is generalized.

I would like to know more about the bird species, specifically why this habitat is so important for their nesting. I would also like to know about any ongoing recovery plans that have been successful, if any exist. Also if there are any incidences of specific commercial activity or resource extraction on the land and what impact it had on the NWA.

Overall, the topics discussed were thoroughly covered, supported by reliable references, and covered the necessary material to understand the NWA.