User:L7mRyu/J. Mark Ramseyer/GumTreeKookabura Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

L7mRyu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:L7mRyu/J. Mark Ramseyer - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * J. Mark Ramseyer - Wikipedia
 * J. Mark Ramseyer - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I do not think there is a great deal that I need to add or criticize. The additional portions added to the article fit well into the paragraph that was already there, and additional details serve to improve the article's quality. The sources look good, although be careful not to be too biased in language. The comfort women issue is painful, but it still has to abide by the Wikipedia standards (at least according to Wikipedia anyway).