User:LAmadefairy/New Orleans Historic Voodoo Museum/Houstonsown Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) User:LAmadefairy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:LAmadefairy/New Orleans Historic Voodoo Museum


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article is great I only have one suggestion, which is to fix the wording in the activities section to make it more neutral. Not too many corrections need to be made but try taking out any indications of a personal opinion from the article.