User:LBaugustana/Children's Crusade (1963)/Ander0056 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) LBaugustana
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:LBaugustana/Children's Crusade (1963)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Children's Crusade (1963)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead looks good and relevant but the second section has very large text that should be brought back down and then have the same style font all the way through the article. content I see is relevant to the article. Hard to tell if the new information is backed up by a secondary source or not. I think the new content is well-written and looks good to me.