User:LEXIBAUM/Linguistics in the United States/Hayden.osborne Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LEXIBAUM and group


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I went back and read the edit history and the changes I noticed y'all make were good ones!

-I think that the wide survey of different linguistic contributors to US linguistics was effective; it allows the reader to see the linguistic heritage of the country.

-There isn't really a clear lead, so I think providing some more solid context would be useful.

-I know there's a link in the "See Also" portion, but I think writing about Indigenous linguistics could be fun!

-The Noam Chomsky section is really strong- I think that could be a really useful model for the rest of the sections!

-I think it could be misleading to say that linguistics only began in the US in 1869- maybe expounding on Indigenous peoples and their linguistic beliefs would be a good idea!

-I think all of your resources are really valuable ones.