User:LHK428/LGBT representations in hip hop music/Vaidajj Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lhk428


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LHK428/LGBT_representations_in_hip_hop_music?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LGBT representations in hip hop music

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Sandbox did not contain any changes made to the article, only the bibiliography of new sources. By following the new sources to the article I was able to find one addition to the article which was a supportive sentence that went along the theme of the section titled Evolution. Since I was not able to see much changes done to the article- I'll just comment on what changes could be added to the article generally. The article didn't contain any images so that may be helpful to give readers some imagery to hip hop artists that are are apart of the LGBT community. If I am incorrect in this peer review and this student has made more changes to the article that I have not seen- feel free to correct me because I would like to give an authentic review on the updates.**