User:LHpedia/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Minju Kim

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because I want to expand the knowledge of female artists and designers on Wikipedia. The article I chose as of now does not have much information provided, so I want to contribute info to make the article more extensive, so a more detailed background can be provided to those who are in search.

Evaluate the article
All current information provided is relevant to the article, but more recent information can be added to make the article up-to-date. Her major achievements are included. More information on her past/current lifestyle can be added, as well as information on her recent collections and work. The tone is neutral and there are no claims with a heavy bias. The writing style is clear and concise, with no spelling errors. The article is organized well; each paragraph highlights an important aspect of the designer, which allows ease of access to the reader to quickly find info of importance. The lead of the article is successful and provides a description effectively, although briefly.

Reference link 5. no longer provides the article referenced. (Leads to an error message that the page cannot be found.) All other links work and are relatively current.

No images or media are included in the article. Some images of the designer and/or her work may be added to add context.

As of now, the article is underdeveloped but contains good foundation information that can be elaborated on. More information needs to be included, from both recent and past times. Including relevant media could be beneficial, but adding more text information is imperative. Reference link 5. needs to be updated or removed, and more current links should be added to keep the article up-to-date. ~