User:LHpedia/Minju Kim/Savannah Leach Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LHpedia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LHpedia/Minju_Kim?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article has a good lead with providing concise introductory opening. It introduces the main theme of the the collaboration of Kim's collection. The content is relevant and consistent with the source, it describes briefly the success and inspiration of Kim's collection. The tone of the article is neutral and portrays the information unbiased, it provides concise information and is straight to the point. The sources are reliable and provides citations with statements such as "The apparel were comprised mostly of pastel colors and prints, and accessories such as sunglasses and hair clips also aligned with the spring theme. "

The information is created in the author's own words and consistent with the article. The structure of the article is broken down well into different sections and convey the information to the viewer well.

Overall, the article is concise with convey information to the viewer. I think it would be good to add pictures of Kim's Collection and provide source link to Kim's Spring-Summer collection of 2016. It mentions the collection but it would nice addition for the viewers to see her previous inspiration from Kim's previous work.