User:LIUOSU/Crystal Lake Cemetery/Morrandr Peer Review

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Well done, Yiran!

The lead and content of this article are comprehensive and informative, while not being too wordy. I appreciated the neutrality of the information you posited, and your sources reflected that. Alongside the intriguing heading of notable peoples buried there, the images used for the cemetery fit perfectly and are usefully placed for ease of observance.

Moreover, the general content of the article is well reflected in the sources you used. As for adding more information, perhaps talk about some of the significant people who were buried there, or more about the first people to be buried there.

While this article follows in the footsteps of others, its organization and presentation have an easy flow, that make it informative and enjoying to digest.

One note, you should link some of the notable words/people/locations/topics found throughout the article to the other articles on wikipedia. I found it makes the article more open to further reading.