User:LPaul27/Rosemary Beach, Florida/Daviess22 Peer Review

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The Leads were similar try to change things around. Yes the lead tells me what the rest of the article will be about, it also told me the location of Rosemary beach. The lead told me about most of the major sections. Yes her article included many things that the original article didn't such as places to stay, restaurants you can go too and more, and things you can do as a tourist. The lead is not to long and is right to the point. You'll have a good idea what the rest of the article will be after you read it. Yes the content add is related to the topic for example her article told me about things you can do there, places you can eat, and places to stay. I believe the information added is up to date I don't know too much about it but it seems recent. yes all the information belongs because all the information she has added relates back to her topic. No her article didn't talk about historically underrepresented people. This information could be hard to find. Yes the context that has been added is neutral it makes Rosemary Beach seem like a good place to go visit. From what I read I didn't think there was any bias in this article. Yes the pictures in the article are well captioned, the caption tells me what the picture is and where it was taken. Im not to sure what Wikipedia's copy right regulations are but I think the picture would work. yes the pictures are visually appealing. yes the information added has improved the overall quality of the article because her article tells us what restaurants are good, places to stay while your there, and fun activities you can do. The strength of the information that was added is that it might make people more convinced to go to Rosemary Beach. Overall I think the information that was added was good. One thing I'd say to add is whats the temperature down there is like.