User:LRAnz98/LGBT youth vulnerability/KristinRutland Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: LRAnz98


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:LRAnz98/LGBT youth vulnerability
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think it is very beneficial and helpful that user added specific subgroup differences among the LGBT youth community. This strengthens the article by adding in more populations that are affected. Additionally, I think adding the paragraph about Bisexuals specifically is helpful in being informative since this may not be common knowledge. I like how user added in Section about how certain groups can help prevent poor mental health among this community. The sources used are relatively up to date which helps the strength of this article.