User:LRAnz98/LGBT youth vulnerability/Mikesettepani Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LRAnz98


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added was relevant to the topic and added more information on subgroup differences within the LGBT community that were not originally mentioned in the article. The content added greatly improved the quality of the article, since the article did not have a lot of information to begin with and most of it focused on LGBT individuals as a whole without discussing the various subgroups and their differences, which I believe is an important distinction to make. Overall, I think the addition of this content is valuable and relevant to the page and will allow for further expansion off of this topic in the future.