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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article titleDeath row
 * Article Evaluation
 * There could be greater expansion into the varying opinions on death row, there could also be more in depth consideration of what other countries do with capital punishment. There could be a section on forms of execution, as well as arguments to why those forms are still cruel and unusual, as well as viewpoints on why they are not. There could be greater context for the etymology section. There could potentially be portions on the equity gaps in the United States prison system.
 * There could be greater expansion into the varying opinions on death row, there could also be more in depth consideration of what other countries do with capital punishment. There could be a section on forms of execution, as well as arguments to why those forms are still cruel and unusual, as well as viewpoints on why they are not. There could be greater context for the etymology section. There could potentially be portions on the equity gaps in the United States prison system.


 * Sources
 * https://journalistsresource.org/studies/government/criminal-justice/capital-punishment-2010-statistics/

Option 2

 * Article titleEnergy technology
 * Article Evaluation
 * The introduction could give a better definition of what energy technology is. What is there so far is extremely vague and does not get into what energy technology really is. The article does not tackle and equity gap, but it could potentially go into the inequity of some energy uses over others. There are almost no citations in this article. There could stand to be a lot more sources used
 * The introduction could give a better definition of what energy technology is. What is there so far is extremely vague and does not get into what energy technology really is. The article does not tackle and equity gap, but it could potentially go into the inequity of some energy uses over others. There are almost no citations in this article. There could stand to be a lot more sources used


 * Sources
 * Wong, Bill (June 28, 2011), "Drake Landing Solar Community"Archived 2016-03-04 at the Wayback Machine, IDEA/CDEA District

Option 3

 * Article titleSlavery in Angola
 * Article Evaluation
 * This covers an equity gap. The history section is very sparse, there could be a lot more detail into the sorted history of slavery in Angola. Some of the sources used seem to be not super accurate. There are many claims without citations. The history section could be a brief overview and transition point into the rest of the article.
 * This covers an equity gap. The history section is very sparse, there could be a lot more detail into the sorted history of slavery in Angola. Some of the sources used seem to be not super accurate. There are many claims without citations. The history section could be a brief overview and transition point into the rest of the article.


 * Sources
 * Ball, Jeremy (2006). ""I escaped in a coffin". Remembering Angolan Forced Labor from the 1940s" (PDF). Centro de Pesquisa Em História Social Da Cultura.

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