User:LWTWT/Naima Green/Communistbakery Peer Review

Maybe try giving more details about who they are? One sentence doesn't seem to be enough. Maybe in another section add more about specific pieces of art work?Other than that citations seem to be good and credible. I would suggest maybe getting at least 3 sources and one of them not being her own website.

General info

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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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