User:LaDonna205/Behavior modification/AddieGrace Peer Review

General info
LaDonna205
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LaDonna205/Behavior_modification?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Behavior modification

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that the edits made to this article flow really well and add more context. Something that could use some modification is the criticism section. There are some phrases in that section like "some people say" or several people think that...", but do not actually state who those people are. It would be helpful to specify who those people are. Also in the effectiveness section, ADHD is the only disorder that is mentioned and I think that topic could be expanded to other disorders. ABA is useful and effective in treating other disorders, not just ADHD and that should be mentioned. Overall, the topic is well described and cited.