User:LaNyah W/City of Music (UNESCO)/Krisso12 Peer Review

Hello LaNyah, I like the article you have chosen about City of Music. It dives into detail on the music industry during that time period. Your article would need a bit more explanation on how important music was in those city and why. To also go into more detail on the type of music they were listening to in each city. -Kriss LaNyah W
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Hello LaNyah, I like the article you have chosen about City of Music. It dives into detail on the music industry during that time period. Your article would need a bit more explanation on how important music was in those city and why. To also go into more detail on the type of music they were listening to in each city. -Kriss