User:LaShaeDavis/sandbox

Hey LaShae, my name is Nehal Patel. I chose your article to review. I wasn't sure if my page was loading correctly but it seems to show there is nothing written in your sandbox yet. But I do have a possible suggestions for you. First and foremost I would look at the sources and verify if they are good creditable sources there's a lot of them but a lot of sources doesn't necessarily mean they are relevant. What I did with my article was I went through each source and tried to match them in the article and individually try to see if they were good sources or not. I found on one of mine that a citation was added that coincided with another citation but upon looking at both citations one of them wasn't really a good source. It actually had a few misspelled word. Overall this was a pretty interesting article to say the least. Can wait to see your contributions!