User:Labdeldayem/Forensic Glass Analysis/Basil B Caraway Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Labdeldayem


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Labdeldayem/Forensic_Glass_Analysis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Does not exist yet!

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section has not yet been created or updated as this is a new article. I think it is smart that this part will be created after the body of the article because it will be easier to construct with all the necessary components of a summary.

The content added so far is relevant to the topic as it is specific to the forensic application of glass analysis. In addition, the information used is from sources that are current (2015 and 2021). There is content that still needs to be added to make this a comprehensive page, however, the subheadings present indicate that information is still being added that will rectify this concern.

The content is considered to be neutral. The collection of glass evidence section provides a wide array of possibilities.

The references used are textbooks (reliable secondary sources) that were written by different individuals. They accurately and thoroughly cover the information that is provided in this article. It is confirmed that the links do work. So far 2 references have been added that contribute to the notability of the article. Because the article is not yet finished it does not really represent all the available literature.

This article is well-written, concise and easy to understand. The sections/headings used make sense and I think that this article has good potential to be a great new addition to Wikipedia. A small note, based on other articles the citations should follow the punctuation. The organization resembles that of any other Wikipedia article.

Overall, I like that a new article was created on this topic as we learn about it in classes and I think others would benefit from learning about this subject as well. I like that you provided a link to the trace evidence page and you can likely add more when discussing density, refractive index, etc. There are also references for all sentences which is very important. I think the best things you can do to improve this article is keep working on it, add links to refractive index and density when you get to writing that section, and ensure there is a strong lead section. Keep up the good work, there is a lot of potential here!