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Article: Resettlement and villagization in Ethiopia
Coherence: The article's sub-sections are highly imbalanced, and content does not clearly flow from one section to the next.

Impartiality and Sourcing: This article frequently makes significant claims without citations. When citations are provided, they often only reference explicit quotations, which the author uses excessively. The sources appear credible, but should not be directly quoted. Overall, the number of sources do not support the length of the article. The author also uses opinionated wording, such as "more accurately." To sufficiently improve the article would require significant rewriting and numerous additional citations.

Content: While extensive, article's coverage of Derg resettlement relies too heavily on statistical information, making it hard to follow. Though mentioned, the article barely covers precursors to resettlement and voluntary resettlement in the 2000's.

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Recently updated: Only a few edits have ever been made to the article, the last substantial edit being in 2009.