User:Lacii25/Evaluate an Article

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Talk: DreamWorks Animation in amusement parks - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

i chose this one because I'm really into movies especially DreamWorks. It matters because i personally think it would be cool to evaluate. My impression was just wow, because i honestly love these type of movies!

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

everything seems fine to me, and the first sentence does describe the article. The content could of been better but its not bad. This article was updated from May 2012 to January 2016 so it's not up to date. I feel like some pictures of the characters that were involved should have been included in the article. As an outside the article does influence me to go and see the theme park. It gives details on what you will see, who you will see, and new attractions you probably never witnessed before. There were other links listed that were helpful as well. Yes, this article could have been better but since there were like 1-2 other links on this topic, the information was just spread out throughout all three when it could have been just under one. The strengths of the article is that its persuasive, gives location details, and why you should go to the theme park. Only real weaknesses are that more pictures should have been involved and maybe more detailed,