User:Ladybug1900/Pepe Espaliú/Ladybug1900 Peer Review

General info
Sunflower628
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Usuario:Sunflower628/Pepe_Espaliú:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pepe_Espaliú:

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a good start and I like the new information that you added it is very informative. However, I do see some issues like your citations and adding more subheading rather than just having one. For example, you can add a whole section about the gay community and can put a subheading as " LGBTQ+." But overall I can see that there are more things you are trying to include and can't wait to see it again in the near future.