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Danez Smith: -The title does relate to the article topic because the article is discussing Danez's life and his accomplishments. The title is simply his name so the article is about him so they relate. -The first sentence seems to be a run-on sentence but it could be okay considering it is a series of the same accomplishments as well. -I do not see things that need improved but that first paragraph. -The tone is set high because this poet is gay and the author makes several claims and even using "queer" to describe the poet which can be demeaning to some LGBTQ community members. Most do not like this term to be used to describe their sexuality. -http://www.nationalbook.org/nba2017-poet-smith-dont-call-us-dead.html, this link does not work. -Alot of people are commenting on the fact that the author mentioned he was gay often but there is no proof or resources stating he is gay. LGBT community was mentioned as well. The award for Gay Poetry was also questioned. -He was rated C class. -Question: Is this author being heavily biased towards the fact that Danez Smith has chose a different sexuality throughout his writing?