User:Ladyoflorien75/Arthropods in film/Carterlillis Peer Review

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overall pretty good. lots of good sources and information to look over. a few notes would be that it seems like most of the analysis of the movies that you talked about you analyzed it by yourself. like in the ant man section you mentioned that ants were shown in a positive light but it seems to be your own opinion. I would try to find a scientific source for claims like that or possiby remove it and similar claims from the article if you cant find anything backing it up. Also if you seem to be focsued on the postive light that movies shine on arthropods, but it would be good to look into movies that may shine a more negative light on arthropods to be less biased.