User:Laeh101/Jeff Davis Parkway/Asiaw3468 Peer Review

I was interested in the information that you put, I look forward to seeing the final product.

Maybe you could work on spacing it out and having set parts and pictures, you could add some links to the places that is near by.

Have you been there or in the area? If so you should talk about what you seen there first hand that people might want or need to know about.

For your lead, try and make sure it isn't too long but has enough information to inform the reader about what they are going to read about.

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