User:Laeh101/Jeff Davis Parkway/MariiMarii28 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Leah101


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Norman C. Francis Parkway
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I think this article is well written and well thought out. The introduction is very to the point and gives details on the exact location of the street by describing its surroundings. I also liked how you included links in the reading for names and places people who are not from New Orleans would not know. In addition the structure of your article is also well though out and put together, which is in a chronological order form. However, I feel like you could talk about why the name change of Jefferson Davis to Norman C. Francis is a monumental moment for this state and also do some more research to see what else you can find to make your article more extensive. Also I would include more pictures of the street and also an info box to make your article fit in with the typical Wikipedia article look. On the other hand, your overall tone in the article is great! Your content's grammar is correct and organized in a way which is clear to read. Also your sources are reliable and all links are working and match up with the information you have provided in the article.

Thank you for reviewing my article! I agree that more needs to be written about the change of names. I appreciate the feedback.

-Laeh Dean