User:Laeh101/Jeff Davis Parkway/Smcoulter Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Laeh101


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Laeh101/Jeff Davis Parkway


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Laeh101/Jeff Davis Parkway

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a good article, however it is not formatted with the "Lead" "History" or other subjects. I would try to change that, so the article can be read more clearly. However it does have good inclusion of more recent events such as changing the name to Norman C. Francis Parkway. Since the street is near us, I would try to take a picture and include it in your article, because there are no pictures yet. Also there are no references in your article. I would also try to include more information about Xavier since it is right next to the parkway, maybe you could make "School/Universities" a separate topic and talk about Xavier more in depth. But overall this is a good article.