User:Lagg0515/Schizoaffective disorder/Apollo1997 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lagg0515


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lagg0515/Schizoaffective_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Schizoaffective disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead to the article needs to be condescended down and it is good that you have made an effort to do that in your draft. Overall though, this article is very detailed and well written which will make it a challenging article to add to or improve.

The section for Electro convulsion therapy is heavily under represented as there is only one sentence in the section. Either more information needs to be added or the section should be taken out all together.

Most areas of the article contain citations, but there are a few areas that could use a source.

The article only has one image. The use of a few more images may be a good contribution to the article.