User:LaileM/Fasciolaria tulipa/2cool4school99 Peer Review

General info
LaileM
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LaileM/Fasciolaria_tulipa?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Fasciolaria tulipa

Evaluate the drafted changes
I read the article an it has a very neutral tone. I do think that there may have been for of an effort than overs, if sections are each a participent.