User:LaileM/Fasciolaria tulipa/GaineyK01 Peer Review

General info
Ap27173
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Fasciolaria tulipa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
With everything, the essential elements of the biology and ecology of the real tulip snail species are covered in this well-written. Based on the listed references, the content appears reliable and the writing style is understandable. Strengths:

Possible Improvement Areas:
 * Gives a thorough summary of this species' habitat, geographic range, shell description, ecology, feeding, and reproduction.
 * Includes annotated photographs of the shell that provide as useful visual illustrations.
 * Includes some unusual topics such as the cycles of reproduction and cannibalistic eating habits.
 * Discusses the financial significance in relation to possible biological uses.
 * Cites sources to support statements made about facts.


 * A little additional background on the reason of studying this specific type of snail may be included in the introduction.
 * To provide further information on habitat preferences, and predator-prey interactions.
 * The part on reproduction is somewhat complex; it may be easier to understand if it were simplified.