User:LaneMaher1/Logic and dialectic/A.Evanzz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LaneMaher1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:LaneMaher1/Logic and dialectic - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Logic and dialectic - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that you add a lot of good information about your topic to the article however you do not have any sources shown on your draft so that is something that I would work to include. I also think that while you provide good information there are a few sentences in that first paragraph that are slightly confusing when reading through your draft. I think that just going back through this section and making sure that it says exactly what you want it to would help you out a lot before attempting to work this information into the article as a whole. I think you add good information, but you need to include the sources. Other than that, well done.