User:Lanerino/Aqueous solution/Ecaldero Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lanerino


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lanerino/Aqueous solution


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aqueous solution

Evaluate the drafted changes
The sectioning is a great improvement to the article.

Incorporating more sources for each paragraph/sentence would add to the strength of the article.

"Since water is frequently used as the solvent in experiments, many people imply the word solution as being an aqueous solution, unless the solvent is specified." Neutral wording for this sentence may be beneficial.