User:Lang11/Digital marketing/Sandyo'brien Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(username)- Lang11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Digital marketing

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Lang11, from the first look at your draft, you need to add way more. You should have around 300 words, and it seems like you might only have 30. What I read should be good but the one major thing you should work on is citing your sources. You do not cite any of your references, so I do not know if any of the information you added is correct or not or got it from a reliable source. Lastly, your draft is a bit confusing. I am not sure if the first set of bullet points is from the original article or if the second set is what you want to add or delete it all. This is just a suggestion, but you could add an image of two to the text because the original article is so long and only has one picture so if you wanted to add more it would allow the reader to have “breaks” between reading.