User:Langgggg/Akan art/Ficklepickle311 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Langgggg)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Langgggg/Akan_art?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You guys have an excellent article. I haven't noticed any bias or information which feels out of place. You mention a bunch of other artifacts like jewelry, crowns, etc. But don't further explore those things. I'd love to get a chance to read more about the different types of gold work. Do the Akan people have any other 'art' forms as well?