User:Langgggg/Akan art/Hfarrugia21 Peer Review

First Section


 * The hyperlinks that give a little bit of an explanation are so helpful!
 * I think pictures would be super fun to get a little bit of visual context with the things being talked about.
 * All of the things in the last sentence of the second paragraph would be cool to see.
 * Examples of traditional Akan Art

Linguist Staffs


 * I think the same as above
 * Adding the hyperlinks with explanations of what things are would be great
 * Pictures of the Staffs being talked about.

Overall

You guys have a great start and an interesting topic with a lot of good information. I am interested to see how this article turns out at it gets more developed. Nice Job!