User:Langgggg/Akan art/Smancione Peer Review

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

- This is very detailed and has a lot of good information. Maybe make this a little more concise and give a broader overview in this section so you can go more into the detail in body sections.

- The lead talks a lot about the importance of gold but there is no more info on gold in the article body. Maybe dedicate a section to this where you can go into more detail while just touching on it in the lead.

Akan stool section:

- Would love a little more information on this. Maybe go more in depth in their significance and the process of making them. Would love to see some photos too!

Overall Organization:

- Each individual section is organized well, however, overall the lead section is much longer than body sections. I think it would be great to have a broader overview as your lead with one or two more added section where you can more more into depth on what you talked about in the lead. This would give you good opportunities to link to other articles as well.

Overall this sounds really good!