User:Lannp24/Huron-Wendat Nation/Sophiazahra Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Lannp24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lannp24/Huron-Wendat_Nation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Huron-Wendat Nation

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi,

Your lead is good, I like that you give a history of the name of the tribe and other basic info.

I think a section about European contact would be helpful because you mention the language being reconstructed through manuscripts from missionaries so they mst have had interactions with Europeans which likely would have had some effect on them.

The sections you have under culture are good, but I think a section on their religious/spiritual beliefs would be beneficial as well as more information on the gender roles in their society because all you have on that at the moment is that it's a matrilineal society, but not much on the particular roles of each gender.

Also, is the section on economy based on pre or post contact?

Tone seems neutral and unbiased and sources look trustworthy and unbiased, however you cite the nation's website which I don't think is considered a good source based on the trainings so it might be good to try and find one more source that backs up that information.

Organization of the page makes sense, but I do think it might make more sense to put language and social organization under culture.

Article needs some images.

Overall this looks good so far, but it definitely needs more added to the culture section.