User:Laptopenjoyer/Momi Cazimero/Owen Gunderman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

laptopenjoyer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laptopenjoyer/Momi_Cazimero?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laptopenjoyer/Momi_Cazimero?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Looks good. Might reword "firm owner" or specify what kind of firm.

The body of the article looks good.

Slightly confused about the inclusion of the story of her last name in personal life section. If that is important to her story maybe explain why or don't include that information.

Add photo if possible.