User:Laptopenjoyer/Momi Cazimero/Victoriawesloh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Laptopenjoyer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laptopenjoyer/Momi_Cazimero?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

LEAD

Very good and straight to the point, identifies the main aspects of who she is (or at least what will be covered here)

CONTENT

What you have so far is really good! I feel like it all flows well and paints a pretty clear picture, once you add a bit more it will help fill in some gaps.

TONE

very fact based and un-biased!

SOURCES

I don't know if interviews are ok sources since it is the artist's own words, not someone else's? But I think that the information you pulled from this source is just facts and not biased, so you're probably good! Your other sources look good as well!

ORGANIZATION

I don't think you need the 'article body' header?

I would probably add a specific section for artwork (like notable designs she has created) once you get more info, and a specific section for Graphics House!

Otherwise I think your layout is good!

OVERALL

It's good so far! She sounds like a really interesting designer :)