User:LarissaSanders/The World, The Flesh and The Devil/Dsabaria Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LarissaSanders


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LarissaSanders/The_World%2C_The_Flesh_and_The_Devil?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The World, the Flesh and the Devil (1959 film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The production section was significantly updated compared to the original article.

I like how you incorporated issues of race and nuclear war into the production section. Race was talked about in the critical response but maybe touch on how the nuclear war was also received if possible?

The block quote is well formatted and ties in well to the rest of the work. (Question related to the block quote: are the ellipses part of the article you are referencing? If not, the ellipses should be in brackets [...])

Your references to your sources are consistent and show that you have done thorough research of the information for both the production and critical response sections. This helps round out the original article by providing more detail about the film itself.

All of the links for the sources do work and all provide reliable information about the film.

Overall, your draft is very solid. Good work!