User:Larsonem7825/Epidemiology of HIV/AIDS/Mohrra3748 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Larsonem7825


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Larsonem7825/Epidemiology of HIV/AIDS


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Epidemiology of HIV/AIDS

Evaluate the drafted changes
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This user began editing to address some social aspects of the disease. This is an important addition to cover the disease fully. This edit is succinct clear and well thought out. This edit is slightly generalized and could be better defined in more specific population groups where applicable. This could be improved with more specific details. This edit gives an application to the epidemiology of HIV/AIDs by identifying additional social considerations for people affected with the disease. The Users have updated epidemiological data and included useful statistics. This is useful for creating the picture of the disease and its impact on the world. Statistics throughout the article could continue to be looked at and more recent data may be available. Information on testing and how testing is conducted is provided which is an improvement from the article. Citations have been added throughout the article to provide better resources to additional information. Detailing of exposure routes and transmission is addressed by this group. This provides a better picture of the disease and addresses complex elements of the disease burden. Edits were made to include goals of nations in reaching treatment and diagnosis of the disease. This provides up to date information on the disease burden and goals for controlling the disease.

These edits have gone a long way to increase to credibility of this article. They have also added insight to the disease and how it effects people and countries. Sources could continue to be looked at and potentially updated. Places where citations are still needed are noted by the group these could continue to be looked at an included when appropriate.