User:Las157/Environmental sustainability of vintage fashion/Akrovan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The article provides a clear definition of vintage clothing and its rising popularity. Would this be embedded into an existing page for vintage clothing? If so I still think this is brief enough to work as a short reminder to the reader.
 * The statistics used to highlight the negative impact of fast fashion and the benefits of vintage clothing are informative and support the article's argument. Overall great use of sources
 * The benefits of vintage clothing, including the reduction of textile waste, carbon footprint, and conservation of resources, are well explained and evident.


 * The article could benefit from a bit more detail in the introduction about the impacts of vintage clothing to preface the article
 * While the article provides strong evidence in favor of vintage clothing, it could benefit from acknowledging any potential drawbacks or limitations to this trend. I assume this would go under challenges though.
 * It would be helpful to include additional statistics or data to support the statement that "vintage items are able to be reused as they are less processed and therefore longer-lasting compared to fast-fashion garments." I know you have a source cited, but maybe another sentence being like "according to a study done by..."
 * While the statistics on the growth of the vintage resale market are impressive, it would be helpful to provide more context on how this compares to the overall fashion industry.
 * Overall great work