User:Las157/Environmental sustainability of vintage fashion/Tkf3jz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Las157


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Las157/Environmental_sustainability_of_vintage_fashion?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article does a great job at defining fast fashion and vintage clothing, as well as the benefits of consuming vintage pieces versus the consequences of utilizing fast fashion. I also appreciated the outline of the growth of the vintage clothing industry, as it provides helpful insight into consumer sentiment. The structure was clear, the article was unbiased, and they provided reliable sources.

To improve the article, I would add more on other solutions to fast fashion in order to improve balanced coverage. Additionally, are there any drawbacks to vintage clothing, and if so, what? What are other impacts that fast fashion has had on society, for instance microtrends? What are the social drawbacks of fast fashion and benefits of vintage clothing? These are some ideas of additions that could be made.

In general, I really enjoyed this article, as I am a sustainability major and this is very applicable to my interests.