User:Laston53/Sustainable Architecture in Barcelona/Skyebmckenzie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Laston53, Elizabethwatson121, Nrmeier16, Nek39


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laston53/Sustainable_Architecture_in_Barcelona?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Pros:

-Provides a clear definition of sustainable architecture and its importance in modern urban development.

-Highlights Barcelona as a model for sustainable architecture and urban development, citing specific examples.

-Provides detailed descriptions of sustainable design strategies, such as eco-design neighborhoods, Supermanzanas, green facades, and sustainable buildings in Barcelona.

-Provides specific data and statistics on the positive impact of sustainable design strategies on energy consumption, water conservation, waste management, noise reduction, and air pollution reduction.

-Provides examples of how sustainable architecture can be both environmentally and economically sustainable.

Cons:

-Some of the technical language used to describe sustainable design strategies may be difficult for readers without an architectural or engineering background to understand.

-The article focuses solely on sustainable architecture in Barcelona and does not provide a broader perspective on sustainable architecture in other parts of the world.

-The article does not discuss any potential negative consequences or challenges associated with sustainable architecture and urban development.