User:LatinaPrincess2003/Neighbors for Environmental Justice/Ddisario Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

pdouan2, esmej626, linagebhardt, latinaprincess2003


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:LatinaPrincess2003/Neighbors for Environmental Justice


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I love all the links to other Wikipedia pages in the opening paragraph. Great sources!!
 * Is there supposed to be something under the “History” section? Otherwise, I would just get rid of that header. If the CEJN and SEA are supposed to be subheadings, I’d recommend making them subheadings instead of just headings!
 * I assume “founded by [unknown]” means you aren’t sure about when and who founded it?
 * I noticed there’s a lack of links to sources in the Southwest Environmental Alliance section. Are there any citations that still need to be implemented?
 * I do think it’s a little hard to read with the formatting of all of the orgs as headers, I think it may be easier to list them as subheaders somehow and just rethink the formatting if that makes sense. At first, I didn’t realize N4EJ was like a collection of organizations, so I didn’t understand how these other orgs were involved.
 * Lack of citations in the LVEJO paragraph as well.

General feedback: Overall great job!! The article reads really well and is definitely neutral. I think the main confusion for me was just the fact that I had no idea how the other organizations came into play with the N4EJ, but upon reading the entire thing, it made a lot more sense. I would just say formatting is the main thing that could be edited, but otherwise, absolutely wonderful work!