User:Latinamarcy/Tradescantia pallida/Ddrobine Peer Review

General info

 * User: Latinamarcy
 * Tradescantia pallida
 * Tradescantia pallida

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the article about Tradescantia Pallida I presumed that the word was’t an english term and continuing to read I was informed that it is in fact Latin. It was pleasing to be informed about the language background of the plant itself and where it is derived from. I was also pleased with the fact that the description of the plant was spot on and that I would be able to spot the plant anywhere.

I wish the author would have talked about how to grow them outdoors and to even inform on how long they last. It is known that many people nowadays are into gardening and may take the time to research on this topic for their own personal gain. Secondly, I would use another term more similar than cultivation. I found it confusing to where I had to relook up what the term means. I would suggest using the term “growing” or “care” for that section or even “background”. Lastly, I believe that the heading “Names” and “Description” could actually be combined together especially since the header under “Names” only includes one name.