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Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title : Foreign relations of India
 * Article Evaluation : Suggestions for improving this article are its expansion by including a new section dealing with international disputes in which India has participated and sub-sections of bilateral and regional relations
 * Sources : India's International Disputes by T.S. Rama Rao, India and international settlement of disputes by Venkatachala G. Hegde and U.S. Relations with India by the United States Department of State
 * Sources : India's International Disputes by T.S. Rama Rao, India and international settlement of disputes by Venkatachala G. Hegde and U.S. Relations with India by the United States Department of State
 * Sources : India's International Disputes by T.S. Rama Rao, India and international settlement of disputes by Venkatachala G. Hegde and U.S. Relations with India by the United States Department of State

Option 2

 * Article title : India and the United Nations
 * Article Evaluation : In order to make this article more complete I would add a sub-section in activities for the United Nations Military Observer Group in India and Pakistan. Moreover, I would include more references from different point of views and I would change the Indian euphemism to a more neutral language
 * Sources : The official website of the Permanent Mission of India to the United Nations, The United Nations in India website and The Ministry of External Affairs website
 * Sources : The official website of the Permanent Mission of India to the United Nations, The United Nations in India website and The Ministry of External Affairs website
 * Sources : The official website of the Permanent Mission of India to the United Nations, The United Nations in India website and The Ministry of External Affairs website

Option 3

 * Article title : UN mediation of the Kashmir dispute
 * Article Evaluation : The title of the article is misleading because it includes both the UN Military Observer Group and the UN Commission for India and Pakistan (UNCIP). In addition, I also think this article needs to be updated with current information and present the facts from an objective and impartial point of view as someone could claim it is slightly biased
 * Sources : UNSC Resolutions, United Nations Military Observer Group in India and Pakistan (UNMOGIP) and The third Party Mediation over Kashmir: A Modest Proposal by Anthony Wanis St. John
 * Sources : UNSC Resolutions, United Nations Military Observer Group in India and Pakistan (UNMOGIP) and The third Party Mediation over Kashmir: A Modest Proposal by Anthony Wanis St. John
 * Sources : UNSC Resolutions, United Nations Military Observer Group in India and Pakistan (UNMOGIP) and The third Party Mediation over Kashmir: A Modest Proposal by Anthony Wanis St. John

Option 4

 * Article title : Kashmir conflict
 * Article Evaluation : I would add more images, maps and graphs to explain the conflict. As it is a quite controversial topic I would try to present the information from the most neutral and objective way possible
 * Sources : The Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights (OHCHR), The Pakistan Institute of International Affairs (PIIA) and The Kashmir conflict: why it defies solution by Indurthy and Haque
 * Sources : The Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights (OHCHR), The Pakistan Institute of International Affairs (PIIA) and The Kashmir conflict: why it defies solution by Indurthy and Haque
 * Sources : The Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights (OHCHR), The Pakistan Institute of International Affairs (PIIA) and The Kashmir conflict: why it defies solution by Indurthy and Haque

Option 5

 * Article title : Indo-Pakistani wars and conflicts
 * Article Evaluation : I would include current information in the results section in order to reflect the effect of this dispute. Moreover, I would also expand the section regarding the involvement of other nations as there is still plenty of detailed information to add there
 * Sources : The India-Pakistan Conflict: The UN's Role in Council on Foreign Relations, "The India-Pakistan Conflict: History and Modernisation by Stephen P. Cohen, Why the India-Pakistan Rivalry Endures in Foreign Policy
 * Sources : The India-Pakistan Conflict: The UN's Role in Council on Foreign Relations, "The India-Pakistan Conflict: History and Modernisation by Stephen P. Cohen, Why the India-Pakistan Rivalry Endures in Foreign Policy
 * Sources : The India-Pakistan Conflict: The UN's Role in Council on Foreign Relations, "The India-Pakistan Conflict: History and Modernisation by Stephen P. Cohen, Why the India-Pakistan Rivalry Endures in Foreign Policy