User:Laura21hg/The Jammu and Kashmir Reorganisation Act, 2019/Achilles' spiel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Laura21hg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laura21hg/The_Jammu_and_Kashmir_Reorganisation_Act%2C_2019?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Jammu and Kashmir Reorganisation Act, 2019
 * The Jammu and Kashmir Reorganisation Act, 2019

Evaluate the drafted changes
The addition of the user's portion enhance the article by adding a new perspective. It is well written with thoughtful wording and it is clear that the user has researched the topic thoroughly before writing the draft. The language and content remains neutral and provides information about the topic without attempting to convince the reader about something. References are linked throughout the article to guide the reader to where the information written was sourced.