User:Laura21hg/The Jammu and Kashmir Reorganisation Act, 2019/Romabala Peer Review

The article presents a comprehensive overview of the historical background of the issue and its impact on regional security and the controversy between Jammu and the Kashmir. Although some sentences are slightly difficult to understand due to their wording or structure. Overall, it is well-written and informative and mostly neutral. But there could have been greater sources and citations to support the claims. When discussing the international controversy surrounding the Jammu and Kashmir Reorganization Act, it would be helpful to cite specific instances of countries questioning its legality or respect for democracy.Additionally, in-depth analysis of the arguments and positions of different stakeholders, including the Indian government, the Kashmiri people, and international actors. Overall, the article does ultimately provide the audience of a food introduction to the issue of Article 370.

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